Excellence Book – Y4 Creative Writing
Y4 girls show their skills in English to the Headmaster.
After producing an excellent descriptive piece of writing about being a leaf in autumn, Shivani Sarna and Lamya Hathiari visited Mr. Whelpdale’s office to sign the Excellence Book. Mr Whelpdale was very impressed and said that their writing was neater than his! Their work was both well-structured and full of feeling and both girls managed to include some highly effective vocabulary. Read their work beautiful work below.